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[托福机经]2016年9月10日新托福写作考题回顾

来源:朗阁教育16-09-21编辑:朗阁小编0人看过

下面为大家带来的是2016年9月10日新托福写作考题回顾,希望对大家有所帮助。

考试日期:

2016.09.10

Task 1

INTEGRATED

综合写作

讨论了一个叫Brendan的爱尔兰人被认为是个到达北美的欧洲人。

阅读给出三种观点:

1. 船队记载的沿途特征和到北美沿途的地方特征一致(有written stories作为reference, 那些描述符合北美的characteristic);

2. 有科学家按当时的技术和材料做了一艘船,的确能到达北美;

3. 北美有很多rock上留下了marking, 被认为是Brendan留下的,因为与当时的爱尔兰语相似。

 

听力逐一反驳:

1. 记载的不一定就是沿途小岛,也有可能是其他地方,举了一个关于驳斥冰岛火山的例子(描述不一定可靠,比如描述“burning island”, 可能不是指有火山的岛,而只是当地人喜欢用火);

2. 研究人员造的船比Brendan时期的大,水手也多;

3. 在北美发现的标记不是古代爱尔兰的字母,而是美洲土著人的标记。尽管某些记号确实和爱尔兰的Ogham字母相似,但其他标记却像是图案,比如太阳和手。这更像是土著人所为,因为他们确实会在石头上雕刻图案。

Task 2   INDEPENDENT  独立写作

话题类别

政府/媒体类

考题文字:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The government should offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost.

本次写作考试点评:

本次新托福独立写作类似旧题“Should the government cover the internet usage fee or should individuals pay for this fee themselves?”,总体来说此题较为简单,思路也有很多。朗阁建议选择不同意,即认为政府不应该为民众免费提供互联网服务,因为一方面会加重政府的财政负担,另一方面会让更多人上网成瘾,进一步疏远人际关系。

 

核心段落范文展示:

To begin with, the users of the internets are supposed to pay the bills in order to relieve the financial burden of government. With the popularization of the internet, the number of people going online every day has increased to a lot, which means that the money spent on the internet is tremendous. Such a large sum of money can do nothing but occupy a great proportion of the governmental expenditure, thus cutting down on the investment of government on other more pressing fields like improving the public transportation and eradicating the poverty. By contrast, if the fee of internet usage comes from the wallet of the individual, the situation will become totally different. To illustrate, the abundant financial resources of government saved by this practice can better facilitate the economic development and render the life of the mass more convenient and comfortable.

 

In addition, requiring the individuals to pay for the bill of internet access will help to establish better social relationship between people. As is common sense, with the wide application of electronic devices boosted by easy access to the internet, people especially youngsters are indulged in the cyber or virtual world created by the social network and various Apps on the cell phone. Consequently, it is not uncommon to observe that when a group of white collars sit at a table in a restaurant waiting for their meals, they watch the screen of their smart phones instead of interacting with the guys near them, which greatly alienates the bond between them. In this case, the free use of internet will aggravate this situation to a large extent. However, if the fee of the internet usage is covered by the individuals instead of the government, many people will reduce their time spent in surfing the internet in order to save money. As a result, the face-to-face communication will become more frequent and thus the closer and more intimate relationship between people will be set up.

 

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