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[托福培训]写作满分素材之环境类

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素材的积累就像是海绵里的水,总是会挤出来的,而且在考试中会对大家有相当大的帮助,下面我们可以一起来看一下满分素材,有需要的可以存货哦。

虽说环境问题是托福独立写作中的熟脸,我们生活中也经常会谈论到它。但就是这样一个貌似无处不在的热点词,在实际写作中论述起来却比屌丝娶个白富美还难。有的同学一看到关于环境问题的题目就顿时觉得大脑转速不够喉头发紧肠胃打结,真是不会再爱了啊,除了不乱扔不吐痰多种树木少用煤就没话说了啊摔!怎么办在线等,急~~~都说了咱们有办法。且看*日报的报道。

 

Beijing is regularly hit by extended bouts of choking, acrid smog, with heavy industries and car-use both among the key culprits.

 

既然说到环境问题,那么就让我们来看看目前人们面临着什么样子的环境问题吧。面临环境问题怎么说呢?be faced with?这如同满大街的人都用iPhone一样,托福评分老师简直要哭了。看看原文,一个hit简洁有力,还让人有一种扑面而来精神一震的感觉,北京被extended bouts of choking, acrid smog也就是大面积的呛人的雾霾雾霾击中了,那这影响还能不恶劣吗?而导致雾霾的罪魁祸首就是重工业和汽车。等等,罪魁祸首怎么说?当当当当,key culprits瞬间上了一个档次有木有?

 

雾霾影响如此之恶劣,政府也*采取了措施,请听报道:

 

Beijing will ban the consumption of high-polluting fuels in downtown areas by 2020, the municipal environmental protection authority said.

 

新闻说北京市区将要在2020年前禁止燃烧high-polluting fuels。这是北京市的一个政策,旨在大幅度降低空气污染。这里的high-polluting fuels是指高污染燃料。高污染燃料的范围包括coal, fuel oil, petroleum coke, combustible waste, biomass fuels(煤炭、燃料油、石油焦炭、可燃废弃物、生物质燃料)等。这些燃料是北京雾霾的重要污染源之一,所以是北京市政府着重治理的对象。而且禁止燃烧怎么说的来着?人家用的可不是do not burn,看好了,新闻里说的是ban the consumption of。

 

看到这里真是对北京的明天充满希望啊,终于可以看见不戴口罩的美女啦~~赶紧擦擦口水,讲正事呢。告别了猥琐大叔一般的高污染燃料,我们将迎来萌妹纸----清洁能源(clean energy)的时代:

 

Clean energy is also expected to be promoted in the capital, so that by 2017, according to a goal set by the municipal government, clean energy sources will account for at least 90 percent of all energy consumption.

 

新闻里明确说了,在2017年前清洁能源将占到所有能源消耗的至少90%。这可是一个真真切切的数据啊。马克备用~~

 

类似的,咱们再来看看新华社的另一则新闻。

 

The State Council on Monday issued a guideline to promote new energy vehicles. Consumers will enjoy tax cuts to buy new energy vehicles from Sept. 1, 2014 to Dec. 31, 2017, it said. The new policies will energize the market and boost the healthy development of the sector.

 

这是一条关于国家推广新能源汽车的新闻。为了减少环境污染,新能源汽车的使用不失为一个好方法。那如何推广呢?文中说了消费者去买车会享受减税待遇。减税政策的实行是为了鼓励人们选择新能源汽车。这样做的好处有神马?后面又说了,能使市场焕发活力,促进健康发展。像enjoy tax cut, energize the market 和 boost the healthy development of这些好的搭配,想想看,要是用在作文中,……简直爽歪歪~

 

俗话说,没有题目的讲解就跟没有婚姻的爱情一样都是耍流氓。光说不练怎么行呢?来看看我们如何做到学以致用。翠花~上考题~~

 

The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual.

 

这个题乍一看不好写,但是我们把刚才收集的短语直接用到写作中,写个段子*腰不酸腿不疼一口气两百字不喘气儿!来吧:

 

To pick Beijing as an example, suffering from the extended bouts of choking, acrid smog, a vast number of residents have been diagnosed with respiratory diseases which are detrimental to their health. In order to shield themselves from the hazardous gases, citizens are impelled to wear masks when traveling outside. Additionally, the rate of traffic accidents has ascended to some extent due to the poor visibility triggered by the serious haze. Hence it is time that government should invest money in coping with the air pollution - the key culprit of respiratory diseases and other misfortunes.


On one hand, an effective solution would be banning the consumption of high-polluting fuels such as coal and oil on the ground that they generate copious toxic pollutants to the air after burning. On the other hand, provided that 90% of energy consumption is clean energy like solar or wind energy, renewable and environment-friendly, air quality will be enhanced tremendously in Beijing. Furthermore, stricter laws should be enacted to curb the amount of vehicle exhaust fumes and preferential policies should be implemented to subsidize the enterprises that are involved in clean energy. Had they enjoyed tax cuts, those businesses would have been more vigorous and resilient in the midst of stiff competition. Definitely these governmental measures are highly likely to energize the market and boost the healthy development of clean-energy industries.

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