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有关托福写作中的病句盘点

来源:朗阁教育18-09-06编辑:朗阁小编0人看过

很多考生在做托福写作的时候会出现一些病句,然而正是因为这些病句的发生导致分数直线下降,今天小编就为大家整理出一份有关托福写作中的病句盘点。

很多考生在做托福写作的时候会出现一些病句,然而正是因为这些病句的发生导致分数直线下降,今天小编就为大家整理出一份有关托福写作中的病句盘点。

  

1. I am not good at maths, but English

  

改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

  

2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

  

改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

  

3.It is children who clear about their interests.

  

改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

  

4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介词是大家在托福写作中低分的常见病句。)

  

改进: I agree with the latter idea.

  

5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

  

改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

  

6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

  

改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

  

7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(语义重复也是大家在托福写作中导致低分的主要原因)

  

改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

  

8. No one knows all the things.

  

改进: No one knows everything.

  

9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

  

改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

  

10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.

  

改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

  

11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.

  

改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.

  

12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

  

改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

  

13. They will learn the bad habits.

  

改进: They will develop bad habits.

  

14. In this continued process, people make progress.

  

改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

  

15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

  

改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

  

16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

  

改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

  

17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

  

改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

  

18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

  

改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

  

19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.

  

改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.

  

20. I felt alone.

  

21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

  

改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

  

22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

  

改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

  

23. What’s about nonsmokers?

  

改进: What about nonsmokers?

  

24. Why not to be a non-smoker?

  

改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

  

25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

  

改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

 

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